Becky Cloonan found this last night, what looks like a student film adaptation of our Demo story.  It’s pretty interesting, and seems to use my dialogue word for word.  I have had a lot of students contact me over the years asking if its okay for them to use Demo stories for class assignments, and I always say yes, so if anyone knows of any others out there, let me know.

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Best shot of the night (H. Lopez, J.K. Fletcher (nursing a mouth wound)).  More follows:

(R. Grampa, M. Doyle)

(W. Dennis, Lopez, Jock)

(Jock, Doyle)

(cinematography by Jock)

(Beardy McFishlips, Fletcher aka “the guys with glasses who think they’re so smart” attr. H Lopez)

(J.K. Fletcher arguing with a stranger)

(Jock, dancing)

(Jock, Dennis, digits)

(Doyle, Fletcher, A. MacDonald, I. Brandon, Lopez)

(P. P.)

(Dennis, MacDonald, Brandon)

(somewhere, a guitar played)

(You can never get clean)

(Lopez, B. Cloonan)

(clear-faced, cock-eyed optimists Fletcher, P. P.)

(party!)

(steeling himself for what is to follow… 3-0, Fletcher, 3-0)

(maximum wattage.  Jock, Grampa, Dennis, Lopez)

(happy to be here, love, Jock)

(how it began, Lopez, Dennis, Brandon @ Hop Kee… best meal $20 can buy you)

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woman, holds up DMZ: this is a very dark book.

Me: thank you! Yes, I suppose it is, in parts.

Woman: its good you have an outlet for that.

Me: yeah, I guess I could be punching holes in the walls of my apartment.

Woman: …ok, thanks..

(becky cloonan pees pants laughing)

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